Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Works Cited


Works Cited

"Attorney General Corbett Announces Multi-State Agreement With Valero to Curb Tobacco        Sales to Minors." Energy Weekly News 23 Apr. 2010: 141. Health Reference Center   Academic. Web. 21 Apr. 2012.

Bartlett, Harry. "LETTERS: Smokers should stop blaming others for their health woes." Atlanta   Journal-Constitution [Atlanta, GA] 26 July 1999: A9. General OneFile. Web. 21 Apr.        2012.

"Blame smokers, not Big Tobacco." Atlanta Journal-Constitution [Atlanta, GA] 9 July 1999:         A18. General OneFile. Web. 21 Apr. 2012.

"California Jury Rules Tobacco Companies Have No Responsibility for Smoker's Illness."             Business Wire 7 Feb. 2003: 2246. General OneFile. Web. 21 Apr. 2012.

"Jury Rules Tobacco Companies Not Responsible for Smoker's Illness." San Diego Source News. 7 Feb. 2003. Web. 21 Apr. 2012. <http://www.sddt.com/News/article.cfm?SourceCode=20030207cf>.

"McLawsuit: teens in a beef with McDonalds." Food Magazine 22 July 2004. General OneFile.   Web. 25 Apr. 2012.

"Tobacco ads ban may cost 1,000 print jobs says BPIF." Printing World 28 June 1999: 10.             General OneFile. Web. 21 Apr. 2012.

"Tobacco Regulation Bill Before Congress." Home Care Magazine [Online Exclusive] 31 Mar.     2009. General OneFile. Web. 21 Apr. 2012.

"WHO calls for banning all tobacco advertising, promotion." The Nation's Health Aug. 2008: 21. General OneFile. Web. 21 Apr. 2012.

Argument Rough Draft


Are Tobacco Companies The Ones To Blame?

            The tobacco industry is up there with some of the biggest and most successful industries in the world. People have been trying to blame tobacco companies for smoking-related illnesses and deaths for a long time. They try and blame the companies because they argue that the products are addictive and they cannot stop using them. However, many people believe that the companies should not be blamed because the people that use the tobacco made the choice to use the product. Tobacco companies should not be blamed for the deaths and illnesses that people develop from using their products.

            Those who do blame tobacco companies say that there are “more than 400,000 tobacco-related deaths annually” (“Tobacco Regulation”). The Family Smoking Prevention and Tobacco Control Act want to pass a bill that “would give the FDA the authority to oversee and regulate tobacco marketing and sales in the U.S.” (“Tobacco Regulation”). They would “restrict tobacco advertising, especially to children” and “require changes in tobacco products, such as the removal or reduction of harmful ingredients” (“Tobacco Regulation”). People who smoke also have a greater chance of getting Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease or COPD. There have been reports that “15 percent of smokers will develop the disease” (“Tobacco Regulation”). If tobacco companies had “larger, more effective health warnings on tobacco products” (“Tobacco Regulation”) then maybe people would look at smoking in a different way and stop. Some tobacco companies focus mainly on advertising to youth. They advertise a lot on channels and networks that are very popular with younger children and mainly “market their products where youth can be easily reached – in the movies, on the internet, in fashion magazines and at music and sporting events” (“WHO”). Valero, “one of the nation’s largest gas station chains” (“Attorney”), said that they will “reduce sales of cigarettes to minors” (“Attorney”) in 38 states including the District of Columbia. Many other gas stations have agreed to the changes which include Exxon, Mobile and Chevron and also big chain stores such as CVS, 7-Eleven, and Walgreen’s. Overall, greater health warnings on tobacco products and decreased advertising to children can help stop people from smoking all around the world.

            However, society makes decisions each day that can ultimately have an effect on our lives. We make decisions on whether we should tell the truth or tell a lie. We decide whether or not we should go to school on a nice day or go to the beach. Some of these decisions involve risking our health, like whether or not we should smoke. People try to sue cigarette and tobacco companies for illnesses that they have developed from smoking the tobacco products. A recent case was presented by a man named Laurence Lucier, 52. He had a “30-year pack-a-day habit [that] left him with terminal cancer” (“Jury”). Lucier sued the top two largest tobacco companies, Philip Morris and R.J. Reynolds Tobacco Co. (“Jury”). Lucier “had asked the jury to award compensatory damages in excess of $3 million, plus punitive damages” (“California”). He supposedly could not stop smoking because “he was addicted and even though he was aware of the government health warnings on cigarette packs, he never took them seriously” (“California”). He is asking for all of this money but he made the choice to smoke and ruin his health. Lucier knew about the risks and still smoked anyway, which is his own fault. A lawyer representing Philip Morris “argued that awarding a multimillion-dollar lawsuit to Lucier would amount to an assault on the freedom of choice” (“Jury”). Philip Morris is right because he should not be suing a tobacco company for something that he knew would harm him after he used the product. If he is not taking the warnings seriously then he has no right to sue the tobacco company because his illness was brought on by his own decision. The tobacco company is not responsible for his actions or his faults. There have been many warnings “for some 35 years on packages of tobacco products [that] have cautioned against the hazards of smoking” (Bartlett). In Bartlett’s editorial entitled “LETTERS” he states that “when [he] had [his] first cigarette in 1952 at age 18, [he] knew of the risks. Still, [he] decided to smoke. No one twisted [his] arm and no one crammed that first cigarette into [his] mouth” (Bartlett). People have to take responsibility for their actions and stop blaming others for the choices that they made.
            Putting tobacco companies at fault is like saying McDonald’s is responsible for giving people who eat their products high blood pressure. People could also say that they were addicted to their food and that the products made them obese. In 2002, the parents of two obese teens “filed lawsuits against [the] McDonalds Corporation” (“McLawsuit”) claiming that the McDonalds products made their children “develop severe health problems including heart disease, high blood pressure and diabetes” (“McLawsuit”).  The judge of the lawsuit stated that “it is not the place of law to protect people from their own excesses” (“McLawsuit”). People are making their own decisions to eat food that can potentially have a bad effect on their health. No one is making them eat the food product. Blaming tobacco companies can also be compared to someone saying that car companies should be at fault for polluting the air that we breathe. Alcohol companies can also be attacked for someone saying that their products caused them to be an alcoholic. These people can argue that these companies are sucking them in by making addictive products but they are choosing to use the product so they have no argument. There have been “written warnings, stories in the newspaper and on TV [informing] the public of the dangers of smoking” (Bartlett).

            Furthermore, warnings about smoking cannot be stressed enough. The dangers of smoking have been advertised on packages of cigarettes since 1966 (“Blame”). Smokers know what the dangers are and they still choose to ignore them. People think that banning tobacco advertising would help decrease the smoking population. That is true, banning some of the advertising would help to decrease the amount of smokers in the world, but tobacco companies are just trying to make a living. They are not forcing people to smoke; they are simply promoting their product but leaving the people with the ultimate decision. If there was a plan to go through with banning tobacco ads then the ban “could cost 1,000 printing jobs” (“Tobacco ads”). There are commercials that advertise tobacco products but there are also commercials that tell kids to stay away from drugs and other smoking products. They tell parents how to talk to their kids so that their kids do not start smoking at a young age or when they grow up. The anti-drug and smoking ads help teens understand that smoking can be detrimental to their health and that they should not smoke. The government has also “devolved [society] to the point that we are no longer responsible for the dangers we expose ourselves to, no longer responsible for the risks we take, [and] no longer responsible for our actions” (“Blame”). Smokers want to shift the blame from themselves and their own weaknesses to those who produced the product (“Blame”). Now that people know that they can make a case against big companies like the tobacco industry everything that affects someone’s health in a bad way can be argued against.

            In conclusion, tobacco companies are being blamed for the choices of others. Making a choice to smoke is much different than saying that the company is making an additive product that they cannot stop using. The product is not addicting, the habit is addicting. Biting finger nails is a habit, just like smoking, that can be very addicting and very hard to stop. However, the habit of biting finger nails or smoking sticks in the brain and is hard to get rid of. People can stop these habits at any time but the process takes will power and if they are not willing to put forth the effort then they cannot sue a company for making a bad choice.

            Tobacco companies are just advertising their products, not sticking cigarettes down people’s throats. If people know that what they are doing is potentially dangerous then they should not have picked up the product in the first place and if they do use and continue to use the product that is harming their life then no one is to blame but themselves. Tobacco companies are not to blame here; the people that make the choice to smoke are to blame for not making the right decisions.

Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Argument Paper Proposal

Issue = Tobacco companies being blamed for health problems that people develop from smoking. This is controversial because some people think that they can get millions from the companies and others think it's wrong that they're blaming the companies for a choice that they made.

Already Know = I basically know that the companies are being blamed by people that get illnesses from smoking. When I did the rhetorical analysis I really wanted to go in further and find out more about the topic.

Research = I really liked using the Gale database for the annotation project we did. I like the amount of sources that they have within the database. Books, magazines, news articles, journals, etc. I think it's awesome.

Photo Essay = I could use a similar photo that I used for the rhetorical analysis. There are actually some photos that I wanted to use for the analysis but didn't.

"Octomom" Doctor Accused Of Implanting 7 Embryos

The article, ""Octomom" Doctor Accused Of Implanting 7 Embryos", from Salon is about the fertility doctor that "Octomom" Nadya Suleman went to. The article says that the doctor implanted seven embryos into a woman at one time. This put her at high risk for multiple gestation. One of her fetus' actually died from this procedure. Dr. Michael Kamrava also found cysts on another woman's ovaries and didn't bring up the fact that she should see a cancer specialist. He said that he tested the cysts but "ruled out cancer on his own."

A few questions that were raised while I was reading this article were, " Did the women want this many embryos implanted? How did they not know how many he was implanting if two embryos were appropriate for there age group?" They were more likely to have multiple babies because they were older. I also thought it was interesting that the woman that had ovarian cysts had to get surgery and ended up getting most of her reproductive glands taken out. Now she'll never be able to have a baby on her own.

Something I noticed while I was reading the article was that it is very much one sided. They did give Kamrava's side but very little of it. I found this sentence to be effective, "Following surgery in April 2009, “H.L.” was diagnosed with metastatic, stage III bilateral ovarian cancer and had to have her uterus, cervix, ovaries and fallopian tubes removed, the report states." When I read it I felt really bad and sorry for the woman now that she has to adopt and she doesn't even have the option to have a surrogate since her ovaries got taken out.

I liked this article. I was always fascinated by the "Octomom" story and it's crazy to find out that her fertility doctor was involved in this. Read It!

Getting The Munchies...In The Hospital

The article, "Getting The Munchies...In The Hospital", from Salon is about people not wanting to eat the nasty looking food that the hospital gives its patients even though they need to eat. A medical researcher tried to think of an idea that was based on his "knowledge of recreational drugs" on how someone might get the munchies. He came up with THC, "the active ingredient from marijuana". He gave one patient a pill with the ingredient and she was able to eat so that she could regain her strength to go home.

It interested me that someone had this idea to use THC to get someone to eat when they don't have an appetite. I can also relate to not wanting to eat while you're in the hospital. After my knee surgery the nurses wanted me to eat crackers and drink a little ginger ale so I would have something in my stomach so I could go home. That was the last thing that I wanted to do after I woke up from the surgery.

I really liked the introduction to the article. It has a bit of humor to it and made me laugh. Another part of the article that made me laugh was the last sentence, "How do you make hospital food tasty? TLC helps, but if that’s not enough … just add a little THC." The introduction also had a little snippet of illustrative writing that brings the writer to the hospital room sitting on a gurney with an IV in their arm.

This article was interesting. I definitely learned something new. I'll give the article a 5 out of 5. Read it!

Tuesday, April 10, 2012

Flashback! Psychedelic Research Returns

The article, "Flashback! Psychedelic Research Returns", from Salon is about doctors using psilocybin to help treat cancer patients that have depression and anxiety. Studies were done on cancer patients and they said that after the sessions they felt happier and had a new look on life, or death rather. The article talks about how the drug actually works with the brain to help the cancer patients deal with their fear from their illness.

This article was very interesting to me. I think that it's cool that drugs like LSD can be used to help people with terminal or recurrent cancer deal with the issues that they are struggling with. A question that was raised when I read this was, "Were the patients using the psilocybin just being hypnotized by the drug and/or the therapists that were sitting with them during the sessions? Were the therapists feeding them information while they were in the so-called mystical state?"

I really enjoyed reading how the patients said that they felt while they were transfixed by the psilocybin. For some reason it made me smile, maybe because they were happy that the thought of death wasn't taking over their mind, I don't know. I also noticed that the writer had some information about 2008 and then jumped to the '60s and then back to 2006 and so on.

This article was very good, I enjoyed reading it. It had some interested information in it. Definitely read this if you have an interest in different kinds of medicines and how they work with the human body.

Does The Vaccine Matter?

The article "Does The Vaccine Matter?" from The Atlantic is about the flu/swine flu and if the vaccinations for these illnesses are really doing anything to help. They say that the flu remains a mystery as to why people are more susceptible to getting the flu in the winter months. The article also states that people usually die from the secondary illnesses that the flu can bring on. There are vaccine skeptics who don't believe that people who get the flu vaccine are half as likely to get sick as some researchers have said after doing a study. There was another study done by a physician where people who were vaccinated were more healthy than people who didn't get vaccinated. This study was ignored by many doctors and other reseachers.

One thing that interested me in this article was that so many people die every year from the flu. I knew the numbers were high but not as high as the numbers that they give in the article. I found this paragraph from the article really interseting, "Unfortunately, the very people who most need protection from the flu also have immune systems that are least likely to respond to vaccine. Studies show that young, healthy people mount a glorious immune response to seasonal flu vaccine, and their response reduces their chances of getting the flu and may lessen the severity of symptoms if they do get it. But they aren’t the people who die from seasonal flu. By contrast, the elderly, particularly those over age70, don’t have a good immune response to vaccine—and they’re the ones who account for most flu deaths."

Something that I noticed in the article was that it gets almost argumentative. The opinions of the different researchers go back and forth trying to sway people to one side or the other. There are also a lot of facts that make the article more interesting.

The article gets a little boring, just saying the same stuff over and over in a different way. In my opinion the article gets an okay rating. Not the best.